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[TragikRhymes]

lmaooo i foreal laughed That lame funny shit outta here =P

And yea ok i got you. It is kinda like writin i guess. To write, you gotta feel the beat. Almost the same as producin but need a LOT more than words. Thanks man and yea real good job again

[C. Rich]

Makaveli, on 15 April 2010 - 08:47 PM, said:

C. Rich: your quality sounds infinitely better on that song than the last thing i heard from you. your flow on the first verse, if it was acapella, would be like technically perfect, but it didn't match the flow of the bass and drums of the beat so well, if you know what i mean.. sway your voice a little more.. your second verse sounds just right though. pretty good job on this.

My latest beat
http://twiturm.com/x6naz

Gracias for the feed. Appreciate it. That beat is nice. Somethin I would definitely jump on.

[Makaveli]

i need to get a new beat done tonight, its been a lazy week.

[MC Coemgen]

Dope, I'm about to work with this kid who I went to school with who makes beats. Funny to me, I never really talked to this kid, but some how we became friends on facebook and soon found out that we share similar hip-hop taste, and he likes my raps, so he sent me a rough copy of a beat he made today and wants me to rhyme to it. I'm a little excited.

[Makaveli]

I kept my word. Finished 2 new heaters.

[MC Coemgen]

And they aren't posted here why?

[Makaveli]

CUZ I'M A LOSER.

http://www.zshare.ne...24729599ca2c4a/
http://www.zshare.ne...247522ebe535f7/

as always, i consider these unfinished, but since I'm lazy they will probably be the final versions.

[TragikRhymes]

Dam ay maka is there anotha way i could get those. My windows player is ****ed up. I tried DLing but its only on Windows Media Player. I kinda heard them but it was skippin badddd

[Makaveli]

yeah.. try this..

http://usershare.net/py0nyt7b69dg
http://usershare.net/pbffhzylhtku

[MC Coemgen]

I love the first beat. I'm not sure how to describe it, but I just love the vibe that it has.

The second one, not really my style. It sounds good and everything, but I'm not a really big fan of the 90's g-funk vibe that it has.

[TragikRhymes]

Inside My Love (And Yo Mouf)

Boyyy im wit devil. Thats that soulbeat! I like the gaps in between um the guitar string i think it is? I think you know what im talkin bout. And jus gotta bob your head to it. Nice

Pin The Tail (On The Honkey)

OMG THIS SHIT IS TITE!!! that got my WHOLE body movin and its jus so funky. The kicks and snares was on point...wow. And lol at the title

Really both was tite and again i would spit on them but i aint focusin on them rite now. And you jus make it seem like you was jus bored so you did these lol, dam keep it up

[Makaveli]

i just made my greatest beat ever.

and im not letting anyone hear it.

[TragikRhymes]

only lames keep greatest beats ever to themselves

[Makaveli]

CDX isn't good enough for it.

[Jittery Blanket]

I am though (not really lol)... PM me a dl link Maka lol.

[Makaveli]

honestly im just waiting to see if this dude raps on it, which would be early as friday.. so if he does rap on it ill post that final version, if not, ill just post the beat

[Jittery Blanket]

Can't wait... I hate waiting lol

[C. Rich]

Dude = TreaZon? Nero?

[Makaveli]

lol treazon

[C. Rich]

Figured...lol

[Makaveli]

funk (in the trunk) just an interlude beat.. apetizer for the next one
http://www.zshare.ne...614215b7579a5a/

In The Chamber (Regulate) [pending verses]
http://www.zshare.ne...614231b97bff68/

[Makaveli]

pshht

[TragikRhymes]

i told you earlier they suck mane. get the hint

i dig the 'appetizer', and you know what i think of the main course

[TragikRhymes]

man yall really needa get up on listenin to a minute long beat, or a few minute long song...

and as far as writin goes...i got lotta respect for these poets and authors im learnin bout in english. i was failin the class, but raised my grade up. english aint always been my best. there is still a lot i gotta do, but when i sit down and think how much time they put into they work they did, its amazin. Before i didnt realize they all had certain stressed/unstressed syllables, set up so perfect each line. And the rhyme schemes they follow. idk jus a thought lmao. I been workin on this journal shit for bout 5 poems. I gotta have each one bout 2-3 pages. Then a big essay about the one i like most. I been doin this for bout the past week or two. Maybe im jus gettin into it lol

[Makaveli]

http://www.zshare.ne...1852997817b906/



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