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Fate of the Throne
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DTM
, Aug 17 2011 03:43 PM
6 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 17 August 2011 - 03:43 PM
It is a book cover I made for my girlfriends current work in progress.
#2
Posted 17 August 2011 - 03:46 PM
Not bad. I'd brighten up the text a bit, though.
#3
Posted 17 August 2011 - 04:26 PM
Yeah, I'd give the text a touch of that bronze-ish color you see on the sides where there is light. Otherwise I really dig it, everything about it definitely fits the title. Nice work.
#4
Posted 17 August 2011 - 04:38 PM
If this is a book cover, where is the name of its author?
Aside from that, it represents the title well, but as EndZone said, text could use some changing, either some shading, or some brightening, maybe a bit of both, it doesn't pop enough.
Aside from that, it represents the title well, but as EndZone said, text could use some changing, either some shading, or some brightening, maybe a bit of both, it doesn't pop enough.
#5
Posted 17 August 2011 - 09:29 PM
Yeah as the others have said, brighten up the text & it's fine.
#6
Posted 18 August 2011 - 05:23 AM
Agreed with everyone else pretty much it looks great, But the text is the downside, I think it needs to stand out a bit more but not enough to distract you from the main image. Change the colour of the text slightly and maybe add some shading to it to make it stand out a little.
#7
Posted 19 August 2011 - 01:22 PM
H K, on 17 August 2011 - 04:38 PM, said:
If this is a book cover, where is the name of its author?
Aside from that, it represents the title well, but as EndZone said, text could use some changing, either some shading, or some brightening, maybe a bit of both, it doesn't pop enough.
Aside from that, it represents the title well, but as EndZone said, text could use some changing, either some shading, or some brightening, maybe a bit of both, it doesn't pop enough.
I didn't add the name cause it is just for online use.