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#1 phoenixsplash630

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Posted 01 October 2008 - 05:48 PM

I find myself getting really annoyed by the way people talk today
With the stupid words and bad grammar I just walk away
I try to think and contemplate
Who people can make up words like conversate
People just try and talk street
Try to make themselves seem elite
But it really just makes them sound stupid
Using these dumb terms they should just lose it
If bad grammar wasn't bad enough
They have to make up words to seem tough
It doesn't make you tough it makes you seem uneducated
Using these things, you will be relegated
As someone who can't talk
Someone to mock
When you go around talking like your five years old
Never listened to anything you've been told
Just talking like some sort of fool
You have to understand that it's NOT COOL
Just learn to speak like someone intelligent
Not someone belligerent


So, what do you think? I stil like the first one best.

Oh, JB, no chance.

#2 Jittery Blanket

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Posted 01 October 2008 - 07:01 PM

Just sent mine to Sharpy, pretty sure I toasted you :)

#3 phoenixsplash630

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Posted 01 October 2008 - 07:02 PM

Toasted? Didn't even heat me.

So, what do you think of mine

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Posted 01 October 2008 - 07:08 PM

It was ok, first one was the best and this one is second best.

Mine is gonna make it look really bad tho lol.

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 02:08 AM

What does deligent mean, take in mind im 13 :mellow:.

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 03:56 AM

JB's AMAZING RAP!!!!!

My name is JB but you can call me Jibby,
I dont do drugs but I can pull a Chaney.
Some say I'm funny, others say I'm hot,
I have more awesome than PLA got.
I have a vision and I wont go blind, I know my mission I'm a master mind,
I viscously master your kind that you trail behind.
The gold is mine, my time to shine. Get that money *****, now wipe my behind.
I own this shit and it's not for sale, no matter who you got The Alliance shall prevail.
Easy now, I think your pants are too tight, loosen up, Code X aint real life.
The Alliance has risen, be ready to fall. We have everything, we have it all.


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Posted 02 October 2008 - 04:01 AM

View PostHARGY, on Oct 2 2008, 06:08 PM, said:

What does deligent mean
I think you mean diligent.

#8 phoenixsplash630

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 05:14 AM

What are you guys reading? It says belligerent. And just look it up.

Hmm, not feeling it Jibby. And PSP must suck if you had to split that up into two sections

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 05:17 AM

A belligerent is an individual, group, country or other entity which acts in a hostile manner, such as engaging in combat.

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 06:55 AM

I will post mine some time today. Not now, but later.

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 12:20 PM

View PostSharpy93, on Oct 2 2008, 03:56 AM, said:

The gold is mine, my time to shine. Get that money *****, now wipe my behind.
HOLY ****!!! That line had me doing backflips off my bed, this ******* rules. Nice rap aswell phnx like the intelligence.

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 02:09 PM

Yea Phnx, psp sucks lol. The thing is about reading these is its hard to put it out as good as you hear it in your head cause people read it differently than you.

But really, mine may be shorter, but it's funnier/more entertaining than yours... atleast people know what I'm saying, Mr. Big words :P


Sharpy's will kill aswell.

#13 phoenixsplash630

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 02:12 PM

You think THOSE words are big? Man, you would hate my vocabulary

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 02:17 PM

Only a couple lol, I like my words short and sweet.

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 02:44 PM

Mine will be very Intellectual. *Puts Smoke Pipe in mouth*

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 02:45 PM

And they rule and make people laugh, no lets not make this another 'Let phnx be a post whore' topic.

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 02:51 PM

What the heck are you talking about

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 04:55 PM

View PostHARGY, on Oct 2 2008, 09:45 PM, said:

And they rule and make people laugh, no lets not make this another 'Let phnx be a post whore' topic.

***DISCUSSION ENDS HERE***

^^^^Got permission from DLT.

I didn't give you permission to do anything. If you're going to carry on pretending to be a mod, leave me out of it thanks.

As for this topic, if I were to vote I'd vote for Phoenix, purely because I can't stand the language/style of rap.

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Posted 02 October 2008 - 04:56 PM

And mine is from the heart. And sounds educted.

Trust me, DLT is man with education. Not a bribe there.... :ph43r:

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Posted 03 October 2008 - 09:21 AM

Yours sounds more of what a teacher would make up to encourage kids in poverty filled area's to stop having anti-social behaviour.

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Posted 03 October 2008 - 11:51 AM

And JBs sounds like a guy from a poverty stricken area who has anti-social behavior problems. :P

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Posted 03 October 2008 - 12:42 PM

lol, Atleast he has one, I challenge you to a rap battle DLT.

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Posted 03 October 2008 - 02:34 PM

Has one what? And I don't rap, sorry.

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Posted 03 October 2008 - 02:36 PM

Oh well lets have a battle paragraph.

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Posted 03 October 2008 - 04:15 PM

I'd still rather not, I rarely feel like writing any form of poetry/song/rap/whatever you want to call it. I'm really not interesting in comparing something like that when its pretty much undefinable as to what is and isn't good.