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What Love Make's with Revenge


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#1 ~Desperado~

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    Never cross a Bandit

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Posted 15 February 2007 - 07:33 PM

Some Call me a Psyco path, some call me Unpredicable.
But it all Change's when someone you Truly Love is gone.
And a Nerve in your Brain Stirke's a point to where you,
see things Different.

Now i am what i started out to be, but far more Brutal
and Unpredicable. They Toke the Life of someone who
wasnt Invold.

And Now they have awaken a Very Brutal Pshyco Path man.
Willing to go past the Limit's of getting Revenge and to make
the feel the pain i had to feel for Months.

My Life has changed and now its time to Strike Revenge on those
whos toke my Loved one, my wife. No one could ever see the pain
i am gonna give to them.

Love Makes us all Crazy at time's, but when you mess with
the wrong person's loved one. Your in for a Pshyco Path stalker,
who'll wait until your alone in the dark.

#2 Unmarked Beauty

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    Violate yourself.

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Posted 20 February 2007 - 04:43 AM

Bandit's the psychopath? or is this a whole new character you have created for your piece of work? Anywho, it is rather scary, imagine a psychopathic stalker in the dark with you. I enjoyed it, but does it have any tone for it?