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Started by Shyseven , Nov 29 2008 12:18 AM

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#1 Shyseven

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Posted 29 November 2008 - 12:18 AM

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#2 Ollie The Magic Bum

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Posted 29 November 2008 - 12:39 AM

The cut of Ice Cube looks very separate from the background. The text isn't very good. There's no flow to it at all. Everything is very separate.

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Posted 29 November 2008 - 10:42 PM

I hate Ice Cube, but its nice.

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Posted 30 November 2008 - 01:33 PM

The text needs some work, the left side is a little plain and boring, try adding something over there. And like Ollie said, make everything flow better.

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Posted 30 November 2008 - 10:03 PM

Can i use it ill give credit!

#6 Shyseven

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Posted 01 December 2008 - 02:37 AM

Sure, you can use it.

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Posted 01 December 2008 - 08:37 AM

I like this one except the smudging behind Ice, I dunno what it is but too me it doesn't look right, But besides that good stuff dude.

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Posted 02 December 2008 - 06:13 PM

View PostOllie The Magic Bum, on Nov 28 2008, 06:39 PM, said:

The cut of Ice Cube looks very separate from the background. The text isn't very good. There's no flow to it at all. Everything is very separate.
This is what I'm seeing, the mood the bg sets almost makes me think batman is supposed to be the subject of the sig. Text is placed in a weird spot and doesn't really fit at all. Coloring is alright but kind of boring... Not a big fan of this piece.
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