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#26 Hargy

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Posted 03 October 2008 - 04:19 PM

*Watches DLT as he runs away crying*


Scared are we :P

#27 DLT

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Posted 03 October 2008 - 05:42 PM

Oh yes, I am scared that a few people might vote something you wrote as better than something I wrote if thats what you want to believe, now, we need to stop hijacking this topic really.
Also your sig is way oversize with that text, so its gotta go, or atleast most of it has.

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Posted 03 October 2008 - 06:52 PM

This is decent, but you have absolutely no flow what so ever. It also boring, for me, to read songs with only end rhymes, and no metaphors or similes, mainly with the no metaphors and similes.

#29 Jittery Blanket

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Posted 03 October 2008 - 10:39 PM

View PostDemon Lord Tyrus, on Oct 3 2008, 12:51 PM, said:

And JBs sounds like a guy from a poverty stricken area who has anti-social behavior problems. :P
Sounds just like me :P


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Posted 04 October 2008 - 04:13 AM

Phnx's was pritty good but it kinda drags on and fells like its repeating its self. JBs woke me up, knocked me off my chair and had me rofl'ing. lol but if there was a vote it would be for JB

#31 Sharpshooter93

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Posted 04 October 2008 - 10:19 AM

I'll try to get mine up today.... but no guarantees. :P

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Posted 04 October 2008 - 10:22 AM

View PostSharpy93, on Oct 5 2008, 03:19 AM, said:

I'll try to get mine up today.... but no guarantees. :P
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Posted 04 October 2008 - 11:30 AM

On a random side note, Phoenix, I'm pretty sure you mean relegated, not delegated in your thing. Since delegate means to transfer power to someone else, or a person elected/appointed to represent a group. :P

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Posted 04 October 2008 - 01:21 PM

Didn't I put relegated?

Obviously not :P I'll go fix that

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Posted 10 October 2008 - 03:43 AM

Hope... Gone today, comes back tomorrow, but we don't realize it, cause our eyes deceive us.

Just like the Second Coming of Jesus. Everyday brings hope, but the days gone by crush it without us noticing, or even knowing.

His dad's in jail missing his little daughter, wondering how she's growing.

He finds it in himself to get back up to his feet.

Lost without a trace, he searches for it like a lost child looking for survival.

He goes to Church hoping for an answer, as the choir sings "O God without you we are incomplete!"

He leaves believing there might be a chance of a revival.

But the day ends on a bad note, after hearing the news that his father won't come out.

He gives up hope, and decided to end it here and now! Screaming "Forgive me for all I've done."

The scene is bloody, with red stains along the carpet and the wooden floor. On the Police report, all it says is "Its a suicide, beyond any doubt."

The next day his father is released, but all the joy is gone, as they cry at the funeral but the grave has a little saying, with the last six words summing it up "R.I.P. my only son"

He looks from the doors of hell at his family. He smiles and a tear falls from his eye. The other inmates of hell, wonder why, but they decide not to bother.

One wise old man tells him to speak. He tells him to tell everyone what they want to know.

Why? That's the question being asked. He wipes away the tears and begins to speak. "Why... Why? Because I'm the ****** who sold his life to the Devil to save his own father!"


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So ummmm yeah lol...

#36 Jittery Blanket

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Posted 10 October 2008 - 04:03 AM

... Voteth for mine!

Somebody should start a poll and put each of our raps in the initial post now. *cough*Phnx*cough*