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[Knicks]

Rate/Hate

[Ollie The Magic Bum]

Excellent choice of colors. The big yellow blob is a turnoff, as is the text. The yellow is needed, just not so much.

[Ryan]

I agree with Ollie the yellow on the right is over powering, it needs a few layers of other colours and effects on that spot to clam it down a bit. After that if you improved the text this would absolutely perfect IMO. A solid job thus far and a nice piece colours and all. Good job.

[Knicks]

Yeah thanks for the suggestions, the Yellow was part of the stock and I didn't think about removing it.

[Ryan]

I wouldn't remove it, just hide some of it behind a few more effects and colours. Having it bursting through might look cool.

[Knicks]

Thanks for the rates, anymore?

[Jake.]

I love the choice of colours. The text could be a little bigger. Great tag though.

[Corporal Hicks]

Text could stand out a bit more i think, I like the different colours sorta trippy lol seems to match up very well nice job buddy.