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[.ęνo.]

Garth Tander

Simple, but I like the outcome. Feels unfinished, not sure what to do with it.






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[Ryan]

Looks a little plain to me. I think I can see what you did (particularly colour wise) but maybe it needs a little something else to make it pop. I like the simplicity and the smaller text works (bigger text is a little difficult to make out) but I just think you need to add something.

Maybe some sort of effect coming from the back of the car might make it pop, like fumes or something to suggest motion??

[.ęνo.]

The larger text is actually Garth's signature, lol. Yeah I'll try think of something to give it that edge and work on it tomorrow.

[Hargy]

Im not really feeling this, i dont see much that has been done apart from colouring and text, work on getting that wow factor in there. Like Blooma said, maybe some motion, something that kinda defines the sig if you know what i mean.

[.ęνo.]

Made changes ages ago, forgot to post it, lol.

[Lenin]

The best bit of this is the text, and it's decent to look at - but it doesn't feel like you've done a lot to it (not suggesting that you didn't do a lot). I get what you were going for, and it does look cool, but it's very plain. [I'm also not a big fan of widescreen borders ]

[.ęνo.]

Thanks, yeah the main idea was to keep it clean and simple, and not over do it.